Query Letter
A query letter is the one-page pitch an author sends to a literary agent or editor: a short hook, a paragraph on the book itself, and a brief writer bio, asking them to read the full manuscript.
Lives in: Ship Dock · Length: Roughly 250 to 350 words · Audience: Agents and acquiring editors
What it is
A query letter is the first thing an agent reads, and often the only thing. It is not a synopsis and not a cover letter in the corporate sense. It is a tight, persuasive note that has to do three jobs in under one page: make the agent want the story, prove you can write a clean sentence, and give them a reason to believe you are someone they can work with. Most agents decide within the first paragraph whether to keep reading, so a weak opening line costs you the whole submission.
The shape is well established. A strong query letter has three parts, and they always come in this order:
- The hook: one or two sentences that name the protagonist, the conflict, and the stakes. This is the part an agent quotes to a colleague. It has to do the same work as the back-cover copy of a published book.
- The book: a short paragraph that grounds the hook in the actual plot: who wants what, what stands in the way, and what it costs. Then a metadata line, the title, the word count, the genre, and one or two comp titles that signal where it sits in the market.
- The bio: two or three sentences on you. Prior publications, relevant credentials, why you wrote this book. If you have none of those, a single honest line is better than padding.
Why it is hard to write
Writing a query letter is a different skill from writing a novel. You have spent a year living inside roughly 90,000 words, and now you have to compress them into a few hundred without flattening the story into a logline that sounds like every other book in the genre. Authors over-explain the setup, bury the hook in paragraph three, list every subplot, or undersell the one thing that makes the book theirs. The hardest part is judgment: knowing what to leave out.
In Ship Dock, StoryHelm reads your manuscript, points to the hook that is already in your pages, flags a bio paragraph that runs long or a comp title that does not fit your genre, and shows you where a published query for a similar book put its emphasis. You write every line. StoryHelm helps you see the version that is shorter, sharper, and true to the book you actually wrote.
Where it lives in StoryHelm
The query letter is one of several submission documents handled inside Ship Dock, StoryHelm's workspace for getting a finished manuscript out the door. Alongside it sit the one-page synopsis, the logline, comp titles, and a benchmark against books that recently sold in your category, each built from the book you have already analyzed rather than a blank form.
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Related terms
The hook, the comp titles, and the logline each become a line in the query letter. Here is where each one comes from.
Ship Dock
StoryHelm's submission workspace: query letter, synopsis, logline, comp titles, and a bestseller benchmark in one place.
ReadComp Titles
The two or three published books you name to place yours on a shelf: the metadata line every query letter needs.
ReadLogline
The single-sentence distillation of your story: the seed your query letter's hook grows from.
ReadCanon
The structured source of truth Ship Dock reads from, so the pitch matches the book on every name and fact.
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